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Friday 11 June 2021
aviation museum trip.
aviation museum trip. we had lunch and then we went to the rescue helicopter and they kindly answered all the questions we had to say it took a while then they kindly let us go thought the helicopter.
Hi Harlow, Holly here I love that you were able to add lot's photos that showed what you did at the Aviation Museum. I also I think that you could of improved in your Punctuation and writing a few more words to make it make a bit more sense.
Hi Harlow i like all the photos and all the kind words about the people that took us through the helicopter. i just wish that you could add more detail and fix your punctuation and spelling
I like how you kindly added information about how you had lunch and i think that you could of added a little bit more info
ReplyDeleteok. Thank you quinn
DeleteHi Harlow, Holly here
ReplyDeleteI love that you were able to add lot's photos that showed what you did at the Aviation Museum.
I also I think that you could of improved in your Punctuation and writing a few more words to make it make a bit more sense.
thanks Holly
DeleteHi Harlow
ReplyDeletei like all the photos and all the kind words about the people that took us through the helicopter.
i just wish that you could add more detail and fix your punctuation and spelling
thanks Hayley i will
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